Sample Nursing Paper on High rates of breast cancer deaths

Yannick, thank you for your response. You identified a number of population needs in your community. However, most are ones that you will not be able to develop an intervention to meet the need. Your population diagnosis is “High rates of breast cancer deaths related to delayed childbearing, a short length of breastfeeding time, hormone use, alcohol and tobacco use, air pollution brought about by traffic congestion, lack of enough money for screening due to income inequality, poor diet, physical inactivity, older age, young age of below twelve at first menstrual period, and breast characteristics among women aged 45-54 in Long Island.” First, you did not share data to show that there are high rates of breast cancer in your community. Also, you need data that the reasons are “delayed childbearing, a short length of breastfeeding time, hormone use, alcohol and tobacco use, air pollution brought about by traffic congestion, lack of enough money for screening due to income inequality, poor diet, physical inactivity, older age, young age of below twelve at first menstrual period, and breast characteristics among women aged 45-54 in Long Island.” are an issue or need. In addition, I recommend you focus on factors that breast cancer is related to that you can develop a program or intervention during your practicum experience. You included factors that you cannot develop programs or interventions for. Last, you did not indicate how the points in related to are manifested. Can you please restate your population diagnosis taking my feedback into consideration?